In Dismantling Vindictiveness, Lillian R. Melendez crafts a narrative set against the backdrop of the corporate world, deftly intertwining elements of mystery and suspense. The protagonist, Oscar, CEO of an architectural firm, finds himself navigating the treacherous waters of a financial recession. His company’s dwindling finances and the consequent risk to his employees set the stage for a compelling tale of corporate survival. The plot thickens as Christopher Parker, an old acquaintance, enters the fray, offering his consulting services to Oscar’s beleaguered business. Yet, as both their companies start to encounter escalating troubles, the story delves into a complex web of corporate espionage, financial crises, and journalistic detective work, all while posing a direct threat to the characters’ lives.

Melendez’s storytelling prowess is evident from the opening chapter, where she skillfully plants seeds of mystery, using intriguing lines like, “something I drank had some kind of rare poison in it, they thought it was the weather at first…It’s strange, what I drank made my immune system drop to a low level.” This initial enigma captures the reader’s interest, propelling them forward in search of answers.

The narrative benefits from concise chapters that maintain a brisk pace, continually keeping the reader engaged and eager for more. I believe the story’s momentum, rich with engaging dialogue and vivid descriptions, maintains its allure despite a few instances of repetition. These moments, such as the occasional reiteration of a character’s “average height,” are mere ripples in what feel is an engaging current of narrative, and they scarcely impinge upon the reader’s immersion in the book’s captivating storyline.

Melendez has woven a tale that consistently piques curiosity, ensuring that readers remain invested in the unfolding events and the fate of her characters. Her ability to blend mystery and suspense into the fabric of the plot is noteworthy, making Dismantling Vindictiveness a recommended read for those who enjoy a well-crafted story set in the corporate arena.

Pages: 193 | ASIN : B01A987ELA