Love at Hailey’s Comet (An Alex Yates Story), by Kimberly A. Biggerstaff, is a romantic suspense novella that weaves together elements of romance, mystery, and military intrigue. The story centers on Alexandra Yates, an agent for the Air Force Office of Special Investigations stationed at MacDill Air Force Base in Tampa, Florida. The narrative kicks off with a film crew producing a movie based on one of her past cases, with Alex unexpectedly cast in the lead role. Jack Hailey, the head of the production company, shares a brief yet tumultuous relationship with Alex, which resurfaces when an airman dies on set, prompting Alex to investigate. Was it merely an accident, or is there a darker truth lurking?

The suspenseful aspect of the novella is gripping. From the moment Alex begins her investigation, the plot pulls you in, offering a blend of twists and turns that keep you engaged. The initial twist introduces an intriguing complexity, intertwining Alex’s unresolved issues with Jack with the unfolding mystery. The clues scattered throughout allow for some speculation, but the unexpected developments maintain the story’s momentum, keeping the reader invested until the final reveal. Even though the novella connects to a larger series, it stands on its own, making it accessible to new readers.

The initial pacing feels somewhat uneven in places. I believe the provision of the characters’ backstory, though informative, took away from the anticipated main action in the story. I would love to have seen the story begin with Alex diving into the investigation with her history with Jack gradually woven throughout the plot.

Love at Hailey’s Comet remains an enjoyable read, particularly for fans of romantic suspense and military romance genres. Its blend of romance, mystery, and military life offers a unique take on the genre, making it a worthwhile addition to your reading list.

Pages: 121 | ASIN : B0CW1HY2GN